Monday, October 15, 2012


I am looking for feedback on my first page. Thank you!


  1. I like nice clean lines. Do not worry too much about drawing things in perspective. Try to give more depth. That will solve perspective issues.

  2. Dude awesome style, yet at the same time, because I love your style, I don't know if my comment will be valid. Some of your objects kind of seem like they're floating in air a bit, and I don't know if you want to go back in there and make them see grounded or not (it kind of has a dream-like quality the way you have it)

  3. Cool I will work on grounding things a bit more, and giving things a bit more depth.